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RMIT Journalism - MK II

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More like the fifth/sixth "version" that I've been through.. because honestly, I don't think it would be wise to submit everyone~

This should be what I would be going with, I've been having problems integrating the logo and the other bits of type into the design - with this one, I referred to the basic design that is already there and applying it in a smaller scale, with the under-colour helping to distinguish the individual words (rather than using different colour for the type) The red in the logo is really driving me crazy, its so dominant compared to the (mainly) grey pigeons and type, although the hierarchy should work wonderfully at A1 size. That's right folks! A1!

Comments would be very greatly appreciated, especially those type nerds out there, don't pick on kerning quite yet - its a little iffy when they are letters by themselves =p
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I just really like this one. I have no critique on this, because I simply see nothing to critique. Just awesome.